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thejudderman | 21:38 Tue 05th Jul 2011 | Arts & Literature
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For the last 2 months ive been dating an old flame from 30 years ago. Its her birthday next week and being a bit of a romantic I was trying to write a poem about meeting up with her again after all these years, but im not doing to well. Anyone got any ideas? maybe someone could give me a few lines or something?

Thanks in advance.
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erm - have we been had or is this a genuine newby
Northernpopquiz`s sounded more like a lifers letter
If I received your poem when I was a bit younger Chris, it would have made me feel so loved and happy and surely that is what judderman is aiming for, making his beloved feel good.
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No you've not been had!! Im a genuine newby. Ive been reading the posts and so far im getting a lot of good ideas..... even with the humour!
Please keep them coming.
Count, Count 1, 2, 3

Will you come and play with me ?

Mrs Strong, Mrs Strong 4, 5, 6

When will you enjoy a kiss like this ?

Count, Count 7, 8, 9

I think I will say "Nein"?

When you're still up and it's now gone 10
Well spotted tambo, he probably works for Clinton Cards
DT I like it!
Feeelings that once were hidden
Are now expressed to you
Days that once were stormy
And now all brightest blue.

Times that once were lonely
Are now filled with pleasure
All thatonce was mine alone
Are things we both treasure.

Nights that once were cold
Are now comforting and warm
Fears that once were very real
Are now gone with the storm.

A heart that once was broken
Can now finally mend
A person once alone in life
Can now call you a friend.

Dreams that once were longed for
Are now all coming true
The love I once thought was gone
I have now and forever in you.
That's naughty, Cupid04, not crediting the author!
Unless, of course, you're actually Dawn Ballard ;-)
After reading that lot - you've decided to ditch the poem idea altogether !!
Clever clogs, Buenchio. If you would be so kind would you try and make sense of my question in tecnology and I'll promise I'll never plagarise [not sure of
spelling] ever again!XXXXX
judderman
My OH was once chatting to a group of SAS who were responsible for the security before a royal visit. One of them told him that his wife used to send him letters with poems in them. He was very touched, until he discovered that she was lifting them from the 'In memoriam' columns of the local paper.

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