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Someone811 | 03:55 Wed 15th Aug 2012 | Arts & Literature
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I need help describing this scene whee my character, Serenity, is standing on the ground along with her enemy, both standing on the opposite side, is watching a battle between her dragon and her enemy's dragon. Neither is winning. This takes place in an eroded arena in the enemy's castle.

Serenity's personality is that of a strong, kind and passionate person, and cares a lot for her dragon.
The enemy is her master, who has endlessly tortured Serenity. He is uncaring, cruel, and enjoys seeing people in pain. He doesn't really care for his dragon, he just wants power.

Help me write it out?

This is in first person in Serenity's point of view (or POV).

All answers are appreciated!!!!! :)
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You've described the scene pretty well yourself - just transpose it into the first person singular.

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