me again grammar!

[ilovemarkb]

The grief that Sally feels is unique to her.

can the above sentence be reworded to sound better? Thankyou

[Zacs-Master]

Sally's grief is unique to her (?)

[heathfield]

The grief that Sally feels is hers alone?

[MarkRae]

It depends what you want it to mean. As it is, it means that no-one else can feel the grief that Sally is feeling...

[tenrec]

Agree with Heathfield's version.

[DTCwordfan]

Sally is crying.

[Calibax]

As MarkRae says, it depends what you are trying to convey.
Do you mean the grief is hers alone, no-one but her feels the grief, or no-one feels it in the same way she does?

[MarkRae]

Indeed, as in

I only have eyes for you - I'm the only one who fancies you
I have only eyes for you - I can look but not touch
I have eyes only for you - You're the only one I fancy

[DTCwordfan]

Sally's grief was so intense, an intensity nobody else could feel or understand.
Only Sally felt the grief; others were oblivious to what she was feeling.

[jno]

grammar sounds okay to me, ilovemarkb

[ilovemarkb]

I replied yesterday but obviously forgot to press the submit button so.......thanks guys!! xxx (It is only Sally that is grieving)

[ilovemarkb]

what ....No Avatar Mark?

[DTCwordfan]

Hanging from Ed's Clifton Suspension Bridge, me fears, ilovemarkb

[ilovemarkb]

LOL