english composition

[patsy99]

The major with with this paragraph is that it lacks? A: a topic sentence B: unity C: definitions D: coherence I've always been a pretty good basketball player. When i played today, I scored 22 points and grabbed 4 rebounds-not bad for an old guy. In high school, I led league in assists one year and made nearly every shot from the free-throw line. Of course, sometimes i have a bad day, but a bad day for me means shooting 60 percent or worse. I remember in college making a few shots that were game winners. I think it's partly the love of the game that has made me a good ballplayer. I actually started playing when I was three years old, and I'd trfy really hard to throw the heavy ball toward the basket. To be able to keep up with the younger guys on the court, you have to stay in stay in shape and practice regularly.