my new website is on its way

[theking]

what do you think of my new website?
its not finished yet but its on its way.
I am only doing this so I can advertise my spray tans false eye lashes acrylic nails and gel toes in the tameside and manchester area. Also heard on tameside radio 103.6fm

[theking]

it would help if i told you my website

www.darklashes.co.uk

[Velvetee]

The only thing I would say, would be to get your price list prices lined up, it looks a little messy.

[theking]

Well said. I am trying to do that but its easier said than done

[homedeeth]

i'm learning dreamweaver at college and your website is something that i'm heading towards. it's basic but informative!

[theking]

Hi
Only had the site set up 12 hours so i am looking at your comments so i can improve all the time.
just want to get as many people to look at it.

advertising wise anyone got any ideas, ie google (how do i get in top ten)
i have text in radio stations to plug it and i am on tameside radio 103.6fm fri 21 nov

but is this going to earn me money ha ha ha

[yummymum]

think you have to pay to get it in 10 ten google, try advertising as many free ways as you can first have you put some thing on facebook, what about ebay not free but cheap, do you work in oldham?

[smudge]

Watch out theking - Ed might start charging you for Advertising on here! ;o}

Mind you, it might go towards paying the tech's to get the site sorted out....

Good luck!

[smudge]

P.S. Hope you sort your feet out too Dot - I've never suffered from that, but it sounds very uncomfortable!

[zxyvixy]

what do you think of my new website?
a linky would be good please.

[smudge]

*What's going on here?

Sorry that last post was meant for Dot on another post!

[Lakitu]

I think you should take out the "I hope you find everything you need" it's boarding on starting the reader off on a negative, does that make sense?

In your 'About Me' you say you do Indian Head Massage but it's not a service you provide, why not? I'd love for someone to come to my house to do that, saves all that relaxation going out of the window when I have to get myself home again.

Nail polish stamp designs - I don't know what that is, but is that 30p per stamp per nail?

In your 'About me', I think you should put your first name, just to make it feel a little more personal.

Lastly, very best of luck to you x

[naflharrison]

looks good with a bit of preening it will be great, yougot a typo on price list there is an e missing from offered at the bottom of the page. ;-) maybe a bit more colour and funky images to spruce up and grab the eye???

[naflharrison]

god never mind your typo ive got a ton of them with my posts tonight for some reason, duh...

[Tups]

Looks good but, just to show I really have read it, there are 2 minor errors:

Failsworth should surely have a capital F, seeing you've correctly used capital letters when mentioning other places

and 'offered' (bottom of Price List page) is missing an e.

Good luck with it all.