I thought you were serious until I saw mibn2cweus, post. Maybe you are the same person?
The Billy Joel is okay except for on the higher notes where you are flat.
Woe betide you if MarkRae turns up. He is a Billy Joel fan and will rip you to pieces.
No, this one's not good. You really must learn to control your breathing, and not sing the equivalent of a full stop at the end of every line. See if you can find click-tracks of the songs you like, so you have a backing track. That might help.