Would Anyone Be So Kind As To Critic My Singing?

[lauratwentyeight]

not sure if i can do this song and looking for honest feedback! if you can please dont be to hard on me lol! but be honest if u can spare a minute much appricited! http://youtu.be/Foyc2BzRx7s Media URL: http://youtu.be/Foyc2BzRx7s
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[Prudie]

Hi Laura, that won't play for me just goes round and round (might be my poor broadband).

[lauratwentyeight]

aww thats okay maybe someone else might help me out lol!! sometimes mines does that just takes a few goes lol ;)

[lardhelmet]

Hi Laura. I thought it was very good.

[Mojo-Jo-Jo]

you have an epic rock voice but if you're gonna put that stuff online learn the words, look into the camera and give it some attitude. :)

[lauratwentyeight]

wow thanks im shocked you like it i was preparing myself for the worst lol

[lauratwentyeight]

oh dear mixed reviews lol! i think it must be *** lol! i do know the words but it karoke u have to read as u sing or u get lost lol! thanks alot guys for the critic this helps me! :))

[lauratwentyeight]

one more person to decide now keep or delete lol?

[chrissa1]

I enjoyed that. Well done.

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks il keep it u cant please them all lol even though i agree its not great but if i can get away with it il go with it lol

[andy-hughes]

The one-minute-plus intro and the instrumental break don't help, because the first made you nervous, and the second left you looking a little self-conscious, both of which are down to the surroundings, and are not a criticism of your performance.

In there is an excellent rock voice - if you had the chance to unwind it fully, in a pub or with a band on stage, you would sound really good.

You have a nice bluesy edge, which is subdued probably by your desire not to upset the neighbours!

If you want to check out any local bands playing rock/blues and looking for a singer - you should be well in.

And, in case you don't know me - I do know what I'm talking about - think of me as the AB's Simon Cowell (without the money or hair!) but the professional knowledge to give you a valid opinion.

[andy-hughes]

P.S. - like your artwork!

[Psybbo]

Wow, well done Laura, I liked it but if you've impressed Andy, that is something else. Good luck

[lauratwentyeight]

hey thankyou simon cowell lol! you are right i was nervous and worried about letting rip for the neighbours haha! ive just started singing in a cover band and cant wait to let rip lol! i wasent keen on my vocal in this the high notes at the end were strained i feel but i was tring to be quiet lol thanks again very much to you both for that feedback very encouraging to keep plugging away! and improving hopefully ;)

[Old_Geezer]

I really liked the first minute :-)

Ok: I think you have a good voice, I think it enjoyable and competent. I can understand you going down well at a local club and folk happy to pay to listen (given a decent band behind you). However I think it seemed rather safe, that you didn't find a "wow factor" to make folk look up and say this is something extra special. I believe this is a common concern and that you can work on that since I think you have talent, potential, provided you feel you want to.

Are you simply amusing yourself or hoping to break into the entertainment business ?

[tonyav]

I liked it, Laura, well done.

[Baldric]

Best one yet (from where I'm sitting)
Go for it!!!

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks tony!

[Psybbo]

Tony and Baldric are fussy too, so well done

[lauratwentyeight]

geezer i do want sing in local pubs and hopefully through time expand my vocals and learn how to sing with practice and a good band which i have in place just now il need to record us live and let you hear us! its early days yet but coming soon lol!