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Hello everyone! Hope you are doing well.
I need an email correction. Actually I have requested someone to post my article (My article is in Arabic and she knows this) on her website. I received her response about a week ago but I couldn't answer her. Now I am going to answer her email and I have to tell her that I wrote an article on her suggested topic about two weeks ago. if she thinks, article is good for her website she can post, otherwise she can suggest me changes in the article. So what I wrote:
Hello I hope you are doing well. Sorry for the delay in response, I was away for the holiday weekend. so I read your email yesterday.
I wrote an article about "Title". and I have attached my article with this email. Let me know if it fits for your website, or do you need any changes?
Looking forward for posting.
Thanks,
XYZ
Do you think this is correct format?
I need an email correction. Actually I have requested someone to post my article (My article is in Arabic and she knows this) on her website. I received her response about a week ago but I couldn't answer her. Now I am going to answer her email and I have to tell her that I wrote an article on her suggested topic about two weeks ago. if she thinks, article is good for her website she can post, otherwise she can suggest me changes in the article. So what I wrote:
Hello I hope you are doing well. Sorry for the delay in response, I was away for the holiday weekend. so I read your email yesterday.
I wrote an article about "Title". and I have attached my article with this email. Let me know if it fits for your website, or do you need any changes?
Looking forward for posting.
Thanks,
XYZ
Do you think this is correct format?
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Yours reads very well, but here's my tweak to make it more "formal" Sorry for the delay in replying, I have been away with no access to emails, thus I only read your email yesterday. Please find attached my article "Title". Please let me know if this is suitable for your website, or if you require me to make any alterations/ amendments.
07:49 Thu 18th Jul 2019
Yes that's perfectly fine, just a couple of small grammar errors, which I've corrected below.
Hello I hope you are doing well. Sorry for the delay in my response, I was away for the holiday weekend so I only read your email yesterday.
I wrote an article about "Title", and I have attached the article with this email. Please let me know if it fits for your website, or if you need any changes?
x
Hello I hope you are doing well. Sorry for the delay in my response, I was away for the holiday weekend so I only read your email yesterday.
I wrote an article about "Title", and I have attached the article with this email. Please let me know if it fits for your website, or if you need any changes?
x
Yours reads very well, but here's my tweak to make it more "formal"
Sorry for the delay in replying, I have been away with no access to emails, thus I only read your email yesterday.
Please find attached my article "Title".
Please let me know if this is suitable for your website, or if you require me to make any alterations/amendments.
Sorry for the delay in replying, I have been away with no access to emails, thus I only read your email yesterday.
Please find attached my article "Title".
Please let me know if this is suitable for your website, or if you require me to make any alterations/amendments.
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