Some Clues I'm Stuck On In The Week 1192

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23A Talk by salesman on new model (7) ??T?E?N, 2D Victim of railway passenger vehicle reversing (6) ?A?T?R, 18D Official on high retaining millions (3) U?? and 28D Hank and John on Pimm's no.1 (4)L?O?... any help ideas most gratefully reveived - Thanks!

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23A Talk by salesman on new model (7) ??T?E?N
2D Victim of railway passenger vehicle reversing (6) ?A?T?R
18D Official on high retaining millions (3) U??
28D Hank and John on Pimm's no.1 (4)L?O?

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23 Pattern, model - Patter+N, new.

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patter n

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28 Loop, hank - Loo+P(imms)

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martyr

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18 Ump, umpire, official. Up with M, millions, inside.

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Pattern

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Thank you all so much!