Could Someone Correct This Text For Me, Please?

[Nove]

I like walkiing a lot, so I would go to school by feet. It used to take me half an hour to get there. I would listen to music while going there. On the road there was an icecream shop so sometimes I would go there and by a milk shake that I would drink while walking. I'm now intollerant to dairies so I can't do that anymore. I like walking so much, sometimes I would like to wake up in the morning, go outside and walk the whole day, visit the whole city, but I always feel like it's a waste of time. Also after 2 or 3 hours my feet already start to hurt...

[Canary42]

I very much enjoy walking, so much so that I would regularly walk to school even though it would take me half an hour to get there, the monotony broken by the music I would listen to while walking. On the way to school there was an ice cream shop so sometimes I would stop off there and buy a milk shake to drink during my journey. Alas, I have ended up lactose intolerant so can no longer indulge such a luxury. My delight in walking often caused me to leave home on first rising in the morning and walk all day, visiting the whole city, but nevertheless, rather bizarrely, I considered it a waste of time. My feet always started to hurt after 2 or 3 hours of walking.

[AuntPollyGrey]

So you've had the Victorian version ;-) now the 2020 version:

I love walking and would walk to school every day, it took me about half and hour and I'd listen to music while walking. On the way there was an ice cream parlour and sometimes I would buy myself a milkshake to drink , unfortunately I can't do that now as I have a dairy intolerance. I just love walking! sometimes I wake up feeling as if I could walk all day, visit the whole city, but, as well as my feet aching after a few hours, I always feel like its a waste of time.

[AuntPollyGrey]

// it took me about half and hour //
actually 'it used to take me about half an hour' sounds much better.

[Tilly2]

Actually, this seems to be an advert for an essay writing company. Is it?

[AuntPollyGrey]

Where is the advert?