Help In English

[fatema]

Hello everyone! I hope you all are doing well. due to the covid-19 i have lost my job and now I'm looking for new job. I'm going to apply in one company which release music of Egyptian singers from last 30 years. They dont have any current opening on their website, but still i want to send them my resume that if there will any opening so they can consider my application. I would be thankful if someone can proofread my email. Thank you in advance.
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Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is ---- and I am from ------. I have served around three years in digital marketing and recently I have resigned from “Company name” as a SEO manager. Currently I’m looking for new opportunities.
Being an Egyptian I know how abc company (company name where I am applying) is contributed in Egyptian music and they have introduced biggest star in Egyptian music industy. I really appreciate your effort and i want to thanks that how you are contributing in Egyptian music.
This would be great honor for me if I can join your team. I believe working with abc company will enhance my skills and this will be great opportunity in my career.

My resume is attached with this email. If there is any suitable opening which is relevant to my skills, please consider my application.
Thanks for your time.
Regards
Abc

[bednobs]

odd. Did you lose your job or resign?
If you and the company are both Egyptian, why can't you apply in Arabic?

[HansUrbancka]

fatema.....You really have me confused.. I have ascertained from this and previous posting that you are an Egyptian, keep requesting help in English, have secured a studentship with a German University for current study and now are looking for a job in an overseas Records Industry.

However, I do Not know what are your career objectives and what subjects you are going to study at a German University. Perhaps it would have been better to have enrolled with a University in the UK and studied English rather than (As indicated by an earlier posting) having some free tuition in the German language.

Hans.

[fatema]

Thanks @bednobs I will keep your suggestion in my mind.

@hans hope you are doing well.
I have applied to a German university and I got admission but unfortunately due to covid I couldn't go and univeristy will take online calsess which I will attend from my home country and my next semester (summee semester) will be in Germany in April 2020. So I have decided to continue my job in this time but my bad luck I lost my job and I am looking for a new job thats why I posted this question here. I hope everything is clear now.

[chelle7272]

Have you lost your job or resigned Either way I wouldn't state that in your letter. You don't say what work you do or what type of role you are looking for in the company

[CheekyChops]

I would probably amend it slightly to something similar to this:

My name is ---- and I am from ------. Currently I’m looking for new opportunities and would be very interested in working for your company in a *insert job here* role. I am experienced in *insert skills here* and have served three years in digital marketing as a *insert job title*, most recently I was working for “Company name” as a SEO manager.

Being Egyptian I am aware of how abc company (company name where I am applying) have contributed to Egyptian music and have introduced the biggest star in the Egyptian music industy. I really appreciate your efforts and would like to thank you for contributing to Egyptian music.

It would be a great honor for me if I can join your team. I believe that working with abc company will enable me to gain new skills and will be a great opportunity for me to further my career.

My resume is attached with this email. If you have any suitable opening which is relevant to my skills, please consider my application.

Thank you for your time.

Personally I would remove the whole paragraph about thanking them for contributions to Egyptian music, its not relevant.

[Peter Pedant]

oh are they marketing Umm Calthoun?
just to show I can name at least one singer from the last fifty y

[JimF]

...as a SEO manager.
...as an SEO manager.

...how abc company have contributed
...how abc company has contributed

...Egyptian music industy.
...Egyptian music industry.

It would be a great honor for me...
It would be a great honour for me...

My resume is attached...
My CV is attached...