Where Can I Find People With Whom I Can Discuss My Lyrics?

[Username1212]

I am not a native English speaker and I would like to know how my lyrics are received. I would also like to discuss it and be corrected if there are any mistakes or nonsence.

[Atheist]

I think you would need to explain what the lyrics are for (popular song, perhaps), and to post some of them.
Song lyrics without music can be difficult to assess; some great songs have lyrics which are unimpressive when read.
What is your first language?

[Buenchico]

I've just googled 'lyric writing forum' and there appear to be quite a few sites that might be helpful to you. Rather than me linking to any particular one though, I think it might be best if you carried out the same search yourself, so that you can find a sight which is active and best suited to your needs.

Good luck (and we look forward to hearing your work in the charts!).

;-)

[bobbinwales]

If you are writing songs aimed at chart audiences I wouldnt worry about there been mistakes or nonsense in your lyrics..
Heres an example of lyric's from current top 5 song

"
Ayo
It's the UK baddie and the Barbie
Love a little bitter in the sweet
Bad boy, my recipe
Being nice a little boring when you in between the sheets
When I ride that heehaw
You know I know how to please ya"

[bobbinwales]

And heres another top 5 single in current charts

"My baby mama one time (yah)
Girl na you dey make my temperature dey rise
If you leave me, I go die (I swear)
You are like the oxygen I need
To survive I'll be honest
Your loving dey totori me
I-I'm so obsessed
I want to chop your nkwobi
Unle
Your body dey baka mi si (unle)
Open am make I see (oh yeah)
Gimme love nwantiti
Baby make a bad man sing, oh yeah"