Your thoughts on my poem

[j1_69]

In the midst of the stars
In the midst of the earth
And the mass of beings within it
The significance of one is minor in comparison
We are all, however, as an individual and as one

Know that you are unique
To be distinguished you needn't be outstanding or stand out
For to be just yourself,
That is the most beautiful thing one could see.

Know that you are a one in a million.


Just a poem I wrote in the spur of the moment - does need some refining. Its for a girl and I want to keep it subtle (slightly).

[j1_69]

The title is 'Venus amonst the stars'

[Thrasher1504]

Go for it mate!

[firemonkey]

I think that its really lovely and any girl would be really happy that someone took the time to write them a lovely poem like this. love firemonkey

[j1_69]

thanks for your comments thrasher and firemonkey!!

well lets hope it works! lol ;)