i wrote this wee thing is it awful lol!

[lauratwentyeight]

it was just a wee notion lol! i must delete it at once if it is lol! so i need a honest person to tell me nicely lol! thanks!

[erin-x]

I really liked that :) You should keep going with it.. make it a full song x

[sara3]

I'm a bit bemused why you keep posting these saying you're awful..

[tenrec]

I'm no expert, but that sounded really lovely.

[ummmm]

Cushioning the blow Sara....just in case :-)

[erin-x]

Is it just me or do you have a wee bit Leann Rimes in your voice?

[sara3]

yeah, something like that, ummmm... ;o)

[cazzz1975]

what do you do with these once you have had good comments? do you send them somewhere?

[DTCwordfan]

She is better looking than Doc.

[Mortartube]

There's only one awful thing about it. It is one minute and twenty nine seconds long. It needs to be double that. It's great. BBC radio are letting unsigned artists upload there work at the mo with a view to getting airplay. I think you should do it. Oh! And finally, be confident in your work, it's of a really high standard. There will always be people who don't like what you do and many who will derive pleasure from it. That's the way of the world. I love it. You have a future, if you want to pursue it.

[Booldawg]

Well I enjoyed it. Dont put pressure on yourself to be the next big thing or care too much about individual opinions. Just enjoy creating and playing music.

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks all for the feedback! teally means alot! honestly why do i say i dont like it and how awful is because when i hear it i feel sick and think its really rubbish, maybe its just the wrong genre im in, after all i just want to rock and roll lol! but i go into folk mode with acoustic lol! cant afford an elecrtic and honestly cant play in any proper strumming pattern lol! so i just need the guts ro get out there and find me a band lol! im ill i have body dysmorphic disorder im not good around ppl never mind singing in there presence but i will get where i want one day i hope! sorry for the story lol!

[rockyracoon]

I really liked that, I think you should do as Mortartube suggested and upload it to the BBC.

[Spotty Dog]

Nothing wrong with that Laura. Well done.

[erin-x]

I don't think it really matters about genre. You're clearly capable of writing your own music which means that you can incorporate your voice into any style you like. A lot of female rock singers can sing beautifully soft songs as well as letting rip!! There was one girl.... can't remember her name (or the band =s). Anyway.. the song started off really slow and soft and then went into proper thrash metal stylee.. It was amazing how her voice was capable of such extremes!

Anyway.. i've listened to a lot of your other stuff and you're really good. I understand how hard it is to believe in your own talent but I honestly envy you. I don't even have the courage to make videos and upload them to youtube never mind singing in front of real people!!! lol :)

xx

[pa___ul3]

I was expecting a pile of junk, it's not really the type of music I'd go looking for but I enjoyed it, like genuinely, not just thinking you were good at what you're doing!
I'd say forget genres, that's for someone else to decide, do what you're doing 'cus it seems to be impressing people here!

[lauratwentyeight]

can i just say im touched and tearful that u have taken the time to listen to what im saying and singing, u ask for nothing in return, i so appriciate your kindness and really good honest advice thankyou to you all! im still not liking it much but im accepting it for what it is and the fact that i can try to do a bit of both soft and heavy, its a big old wotld out there and hard to find a place for sharing lol! so thanks once agian means a great deal to me xxxxxxx

[argorstran]

Wonderful Laura , make sure you copyright it .

[bobthefisherman]

Laura,
Have you ever looked at http://www.themusicblast.com ...?
It's well worth sticking a recording on there, especially someone with your amazing talent.....
bob xx

[erin-x]

This site is very good also.. my Uncle uses it a lot :) http://www.reverbnation.com/