Does Anyone Get Any Emtion From This Music At All?

[lauratwentyeight]

http://youtu.be/OSgC9v-rFTA

the reason i ask is because its short i cant play guitar so i have picked the chords then strummed over the recording all done in a ameture crap way haha! but its from my heart none the less x Media URL: http://youtu.be/OSgC9v-rFTA
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[Zacs-Master]

It's a bit repetitive and the timing is out in some places. Why don't you have some lessons as you obviously have raw talent?

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks for your feedback zacs-master, ive tried lessons but i just couldent get it lol! this is tly way i can play in the unconventional micky mouse sense lol! yeah i know its out in timing in places and it repetitive but all i want to do was to create an emotion from music cause i love it! thanks for listening very much very kind of you :)

[The Builder]

It's always worth practising with a metronome Laura, or some drum software, to get your own sense of timing "internalised".

You obviously have a good feel for harmony. Why not hum along to the guitar figure and develop a melody or two. That simple sequence offers up a lot of interesting possibilities. Have fun :o)

[tamborine]

If you're intent on guitar plucking do it using ALL fingers & thumb. Youtube has lots of demo vids to learn 'correct' fingering from. Your vid is more an exercise than emotion.

Keep at it as making ur own music is very satisfying.