Rate My Latest Comic Art?

[Johntorrent]

Fair and honest Critique welcome

http://img243.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=877732150_Steve1_122_254lo.jpg

http://img234.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=877773310_Steve2_122_489lo.jpg

http://img225.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=877803533_Steve4_122_834lo.jpg

http://img41.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=877830269_Steve5_122_7lo.jpg

[ferlew]

Tosh!

[Zacs-Master]

I don't think you've got enough strong shadow in it. Have you seen this website
http://www.imaginefx.com/02287754331046497736/

[gsr600]

some people are so quick to judge, I wish I could draw something like that it would be great,

[B00]

Agree with gsr, I thought they were good, wish I was as artistically talented, well done :-)

[tonyav]

Yep, they look good to me.

[jno]

they're okay, competent, but a bit characterless: hard to tell exactly what the woman's thinking.

first one: woman's left forearm is just a straight line

third: I'd get rid of the lines marking her cheekbones and bridge of her nose (your colouring's doing the job already) but maybe give her fingernails.

fourth: too much clutter. Ditch the sofa etc, just empty space distracting from the focus.

[jno]

I'd politely disagree with Zacs, shadow is useful but not really necessary to comic art; it's not Caravaggio

[B00]

She's got epic strength by the way, don't think I could lug a bloke across the floor!

[B00]

Ahhh! Silly me!