I Wrote A Wee Song Anyone For Critic Lol?

[lauratwentyeight]

it was just a wee quick one i cant play guitar so its two chords haha! hope someone on earth might like it lol!
http://youtu.be/Zo2sAH7kUD4

[Mamyalynne]

Hi Earth to Laura lol - it suits your voice very well, am not over keen on the american type twang at the end of lines. But for a few minutes work, I say , well done.x

[tonyav]

Like it, Laura.

[lauratwentyeight]

haha thanks guys! yeah just a quick rush job a great way to cure boredom and feel like your learning something cheers for taking time to listen very much appreciated :)

[ELVIS68]

Saying this in my best Simon Cowell voice....

Laura, you have a very good voice, I liked the song but didn't like the way you sung it, too twingy twangy country and western style which doesn't suit your voice.
Still a yes from me though, see you in the next round lol x

[lauratwentyeight]

haha thank simon em i mean elvis i agree i dont like it it really annoying my ears now haha! x

[ELVIS68]

Still think you should have a go at All Saints, Never Ever

Chop Chop x

[lauratwentyeight]

i tried it and was impossible honest lol x

[ELVIS68]

Ok let's hear it