"the Day That Turned To Night"

[TWR]

Why was I sent here
They said it was to fight
My memories of the carnage
The day that turned to night

I can hear the Crying, I can hear the Moans
I see men all around me
I also hear the groans
Can you see what I see
The day that turned to night

In my arms I hold you
In my arms you died
In my eyes I see you
You tried to win but died

My Memories of you sir
the sir I did not know
your memories will be with me
The day I let you go

Why was I sent here
They said it was to fight
My memories of the carnage
The day that turned to night

When I look around me
There are body's here and there
Tell me this war is Equal
Don't tell me that's it's fair

The people that sent us here
They have not got a clue
The body's all around me
they never even knew

Good night my friends I'm leaving
It's time for me to go
Iv done my duty for this place
what have I to show

[-Talbot-]

In all honesty, TW that is much better than I anticipated. Have you performed the song to an audience?

[TWR]

Hi Talbot
There is something in my life that I HATE, that part is being outspoken, but I can not help the way I am, my lyrics is a part of me I enjoy as I can see in my mind by the way I put thing down ( Each to his / her own, my feelings, One of my Brothers Died in Aus a few years back, I put a Song together for his family, " Brother can you hear me" we come from a Costal Place called Bangor N.Wales, the Songs Starts with a Choir in the background & a voice singing to the sea, it sent waves like the call of the "WALES" It bounces across the Sea to Aus, Hence, " Brother can you hear me" I sent a few Lyrics to a comp in London Many many years ago, one of these came back with a comment, if you can re-arrange the words we can do something with it, Something was done with e Lyric but I did not have copy write, OH well, that's life, I write when I down, then I can see where I'm going.

[TWR]

Whale

[chaptazbru2]

That's very moving.

[Mamyalynne]

Beautiful words from the heart.x

[marval]

That is very good, it really makes one think.