98% Of My Story Is Done And The Last Two Percent Is The Last Scene And The Title. Help?!

[Ismale1]

So In the beginning in the mid-late 1800s a man named Jack (antagonist) discovered an element called imperium. He started a science company called Serebrum with his friend from university Ben. During the time of messing with the element, it helped unlock the full potential of human advancement. Many things like parallel worlds were discovered, alchemy was invented, which is the magic system and people started to turn mad and become monsters (most vampires). Jack had a daughter but she died and he yearned for another daughter and asked Ben to get one from his parallel self. He got one from Mark (protagonist) who is a scientist of our world. jack named his new daughter after his old one.

A rock was found which housed a fraction of a being that leaped into now jack's daughter Victoria. Ben discovered the being is an inter dimensional being which he named the dragon, and realized that if she and the dragon were to become one she would become the most powerful being that could destroy the multiverse. Ben tells Jack this and jack decides to not send Victoria back to her world. Ben decides he's going to do this on his own but is almost killed by jack.

He decides to go back to Mark to get Victoria back. At the beginning of the story mark finds Victoria and they plan to leave by train but things happen like being captured by queen Bathory of the vampires, Jack brainwashing the city it takes place in that it is Mark's fault for bringing in the monsters that terrorize the city and kill people. His men who are alchemist of the law and a bounty hunter named wolfboy.

At a halfway point Jack has taking control of a device known as the tower that he can mess with parallel worlds. he plans to fuse earths together to form new a new perfect world because of how *** his world is with the monsters. So Victoria and mark have to stop him. At the end they face him and destroy the device turning the multiverse into one universe and now only one earth called new earth. jack ask mark questions like why was he was chosen to get Victoria which everything is laid out from what happened in the beginning because he forgot. The dragon fuses with Victroia and tells Mark now to kill him becuase hes no longer a threat

I have an idea for an ending that the story is in a causal loop but cant figure out how to make it happen nor can I figure out a title for it. Help?!

[Arksided]

The Butler did it!

;-)

[DTCwordfan]

the Butler being David Beckham and he and Victoria consummated it in the Field of Dreams, the question to call the progeny, Romeo, Bobby, Matt or Alex, or female equivalents like Poppy or Porsche or Escalator.

[Arksided]

Well done on getting as far as you have without figuring out your ending. I wrote a manuscript for a novel years ago called time pockets which combined Sci-Fi with a detective story, I figured how it would be rounded up halfway through and made subsequent changes to the first half as it ended up interwoven with events of the first half. Yours seem very complicated and seems to have so many genres thrown together, well done sounds very imaginative though sorry I can't help.

[DTCwordfan]

Title? - "Blackjack - Twenty-One Perhaps?"