A poem for ummm...

Bbbananas | 10:28 Fri 23rd Oct 2009 | ChatterBank

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Not a red rose or a satin heart -
I give you an onion.
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper.

It promises light... like the careful undressing of a lover.
It will blind you with tears, like a lover.
And it's scent will cling to your fingers, like a lover.

(I've taken a few liberties....)

As the tone of this site cannot be lowered any more after my flagrant and regretful use of the word "GUSSET'

I have a bit of time on my hands...

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albaqwerty

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quite brilliant!!!!

Bbbananas

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I can't wait for Umm's reply - 'onions are smelly....' ;-)

Ankou

yep, rhyming lover with lover three times....what a fricking liberty !

Not a red rose or a satin heart -
I give you an onion.
It is a moon wrapped in a manly fart
it can work well on a bunion

It promises light... like the careful undressing of a lover.
unless the light is off and we lose each other
It will blind you with tears, like a lover
or just make you cry like the onion i gave abover
And it's scent will cling to your fingers,
like a garlic that has been chopped by your mother or brother.