How Does My Ebay Ad Sound

[computer14]

I have an ibook g3 that is in working condition and includes two charger osx tiger cds and battery (it needs replacing) but works fine plug in.
and the ibook g3!
Here is what the ibook g3 is about..

Machine Name: iBook Machine Model: PowerBook4,3 CPU Type: PowerPC 750 (2.2) Number Of CPUs: 1 CPU Speed: 800 MHz L2 Cache (per CPU): 512 KB Memory: 256 MB Bus Speed: 100 MHz Boot ROM Version: 4.6.4f1 Serial Number: UV323494PET

It comes with osx tiger and has a cd drive
i(t can't run anything after osx tiger)
where the battery holds in there is missing a screw but i have duct tape holding it in This item is used but stills works good.
and the problem that it had before was when i put it in sleepmode when plug in it would wake up by itself and when i open the lid it would take a few secs to go back to sleep by itself. this no longer does it last time i check but it may do it again. and the battery is okay but works best plug in. it will go to 0% around 75% or 70% thanks for looking!! But the ibook g3 works now!!! it will be great for basics like email web and word. Buy my ibook g3 and save yourself 999 dollars from apple. apple no longer makes these but this is still a great little computer for the basics. This computer is not the fastest but it will do for the basics!! thanks for looking Happy bidding!
i am kind of new to ebay

[factor-fiction]

Sorry Tilly2, I seem to be confusing computer14 with detour1 who was the same age in the US and had the same issues. computer 14 is very concerned about feelings and motives of others and is very focused on perfecting his ads, and that may answer Twenty20s query.

[woofgang]

Sharingan "a few niggles" like an old OS and its held together with duck tape ROFL

[factor-fiction]

I agree with sharingnan. Some information is helpful; too much clutters up the ad and puts people off. For example you don't need to say "save yourself 999 dollars..." because your product is not equivalent to an expensive new apple product.

[THEMOTLEY1]

sounds like advertising to me,