Hello! My university is collaborating with a Swedish university, and Swedish university is offering scholarships and i want to apply for that, I and my cousin together we wrote a scholarship motivational latter and i want someone to please proofread this and suggest me changes. Thank you in advance.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1JRw0x4P10Pv5qGCU2_MmlXI4mK4p6alP/view?usp=sharing
I'll proofread your question. I suggest the following:-
Hello! My university is collaborating with a Swedish university which is offering scholarships and I would like to apply for one. My cousin and I and my cousin have written a scholarship motivational letter and I would be grateful if someone would please proofread it and suggest any necessary changes. Thank you in advance.
Usual sarcasm from Baldric to someone whose first language is probably not English. Might have been better to either ignore the post or suggest something positive.
I am sorry everyone. My latter is on Google Drive and I shared it's link here. Please click on the link there will be a word document and that I want to proofread. Thank you.