I just made a rough recording for a song so i can make adjustments when i do the final recording, let me know what you think please! It'll only take a couple minutes a few clicks. Any feedback is appreciate as long as it's constructive.
I can see what you were 'trying' to do, in the whole slow-talking/laid back thing, but it just didn't really do it for me. The Duck thing in the middle was hilarious, although I'm not sure that's the reaction you are looking for.
Not really my ting, but trying to be a little constructive the Drums are a little over the top, too many fill ins with the off-beats. I seriously suggest you lose the Duck although as being said it is funny on first listening and not expecting it... and the rapping has no conviction as to what (I could make out) you are saying.
Probably because she's fairly successful in her own right I'd imagine.
Mark Grist is a English teacher who engages in rap battles with his students. WARNING: Swearing, aggressive lyrics and rude things said about people's mothers in this clip: