What do you think of my new song?

[shouldwecuddle]

I just made a rough recording for a song so i can make adjustments when i do the final recording, let me know what you think please! It'll only take a couple minutes a few clicks. Any feedback is appreciate as long as it's constructive.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_CGIJEne0p8

[sir.prize]

An opinion, but not very constructive. Everyone has their own choice. No doubt it will be considered great in some circles; unfortunately I am not a fan of rap and it does nothing for me. I was puzzled by what happened at 1min onwards! What was that 'moaning'?

Is that a UFO in your picture?

[MASS1961]

Not my cup of tea but it sounds ok until you get to the 2 'choruses' (is that plural?) with the cat, does nothing for it. Not sure what you're trying to do there

[Mamyalynne]

I liked the main rap but not the strange voice warping or whatever the technical term is.

[ELVIS68]

You sound bored, so does Donald Duck in the chorus

Sorry, it's a No from me

[Jordyboy9]

RUBBISH

[Baldric]

Up to the 1 minute mark your words are slurred one into another and are incomprehensible. After 1 minute mark when Donald Duck comes in it just becomes a joke.

[AB Editor]

Really, really poor. BUT, better than the misogynistic crap you smeared across our good website yesterday. Well done for not referring to a woman as a female dog in this one.

[boxtops]

agree with Baldric, whatever IS that? - it sounds like a baby, or helium, or what - really spoils it.

[jackthehat]

I take it 'shouldwecuddle' is not the name your homies know you by?

I thought the entire song quite poor.

[boxtops]

^ oh dear Ed - I didn't see that. Probably just as well.

[factor-fiction]

Am I the odd one out then? Typical.
I quite like stuff like this -until Donald Duck joins in after 1 minute.
Are you doing the main vocals or are you the duck?

[Mick-Talbot]

Have you sent a demo over to iRatz?
maybe he could do with a good laugh too?


I think Donald D is the best bit.......................

[guilliebrougues]

I thought you said it was a song, all you are doing is talking while music is playing. Sorry do not like it. :(

[Mick-Talbot]

Cold, cold world , even rappers saying burp!

? is that the only word you could find to rhyme with hurt?
Still lovin the duck.

[Baldric]

He liked it!

http://www.google.co....=0CFUQ9QEwCg&dur=1817

:o)

[AB Editor]

ShouldWeCuddle is being dissed by a bunch of crossword fans. Will he return to defend his honour?

There's so much good rap/spoken word out there at the moment. Not sure why he's bothered: