Would Anyone Be So Kind As To Critic My Singing?

[lauratwentyeight]

not sure if i can do this song and looking for honest feedback! if you can please dont be to hard on me lol! but be honest if u can spare a minute much appricited! http://youtu.be/Foyc2BzRx7s Media URL: http://youtu.be/Foyc2BzRx7s
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[lauratwentyeight]

thanks very much baldric and tony and all lol!

[Baldric]

One has to maintain certain standards Sibs.

[lauratwentyeight]

i know i have a long way to the top if i wanna rock and roll i need to learn to sing still but its a start and i appreciate the encouragement and advice thankyou ;)

[tonyav]

Psybbo
Tony and Baldric are fussy too, so well done


LOL, she knows us to well, Baldric.

[Marijn]

You sound like Shania Twain

[RATTER15]

I liked it, go for it, I'm sure you could get some good gigs.

[sandyRoe]

I liked it. You've a good clear singing voice and I could hear the lyrics.

[RATTER15]

I agree Marijn, she does have that sound to her.

[boxtops]

Nice one, Laura (and you turned off the TV :-)

[DrFilth]

tv companies will be wondering why all the tellys have been turned off and everyone is on youtube -)

[CokeTulip]

I really loved your voice Laura. I wasn't keen on the clip - sitting down and abit devoid of energy. Image is very important. Too many distractions and work on your eye contact..

I think if you did this as audio only - amazing.
But I was abit frustrated waiting for you to sing and nearly gave up!!. I dont think you can give this your best at all sitting down.
You have a beautiful face but (you'll hate me for this) - I hated the hair considering rock! It was too groomed and abit boring....&.everyone has a bob and I wuold have liked to see me more individuality. You need a look but this is only my personal opinion you understand. I wanted to listen to you & not see you because I liked what I was hearing but didn't like what I was looking at - the walls, the TV etc. As little eye contact I lost interest looking but that is the main reason.

[Khandro]

I think it's good Laura, alone in a room it's not easy to create 'atmosphere', I suggest you work on it and make another presentation before an audience and with someone to help with better recording equipment. If you want to get anywhere, presentation is everything, don't compromise, nothing is easy. Good luck!

[ludwig]

I think you make better job of it than this..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aEKxOnChI14